Writing Goals

Writing Goals
To write longer sentences. To write longer stories. To use quotations right and to challenge the reader

Tuesday, March 29, 2011

motivation

i think motivation far some people is the satisfaction of getting your goal or greed is motivaton for some. my motivation is what is to come for hard work or patiences.

Monday, March 28, 2011

fighting

i think that you should fight when the reason calls for it but when you fight for violence or something that really doesnt even have to be fought for you should walk away or stop the fight.
and i think that most fights start with revenge and ends with the person getting revenge and the other person wanting it again, going back and forth back and forth back and forth.

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

new york times

theres radioactive iodine in the water in tokoyo, the children there are in danger of this radioactive iodine killing them, the adults are introuble too but the kids are smaller so there more chanse they'll die or get sick.

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

today

Im going to write about what i did to day. well first i woke up took a shower and ate some yogurt then after wards I got my shoes on and went out to my bus stop. then as i approached the bus stop i saw the kid who stands at my stop too. we talked for about 45 seconds, before the bus came.
once we go to school i put my stuff in the locker and went to class, it was wierd though because i was the first one there and im usually not the first one there. and after i went to my next class it was sssuuupppeeerrr boring i hate it. so by third hour i ws in math ya know doing the usually math stuff, fourth science i firgured out that i acsedently did my 1st round prompt, for my 2nd prompt. but now im in 5th hour writing about what i did today.

Friday, March 18, 2011

response to Ms langler blog and question

I like the title of Ms.Langler title it has a meaning that will get you far in life. And if i had any power it would be super strong.

i think that jack taylors super power would be awesome but mine is better.

Friday, February 4, 2011

Constellations

Constellations
And the fight of the planets!

Constellations are things made up, to tell a stories or us to memories were stars were. Trying to tell which star is which is hard, so people over the years have made stories or shapes out of the stars thus making constellations. There are many constellations such as Orion the hunter, Draco the dragon, and Famalhuat the fish. A good summery of what it is, is a group of stars that make a mostly fiction person or animal and make a story of it. But something’s they think of are very creative because you could look at the stars and not see anything but it will end up being some kind of dog. There are many stories of constellations like this one. There once was a constellation named Capleo. Capleo was the most strong and brave man in the milky way. He went from fighting bulls to wrestling dragons. Then one day a constellation named Senco herd of Capleos bravery and wanted to challenge him to a dual to the death, but Capleo wasn’t fazed by this new challenger.
So he went to his mom to see what to do if he she face this new challenger or not take the challenge. But truthfully Capleo wasn’t going to listen to his mom at all he was going to do what he knew was right. He was either going to take the challenge or not and look like a fool. So he announced his answer back was YES. The fight is on, Senco and Capleo had a legendary dual in the arena of Tetris.
They fought and fought till the sun went down, they kept fighting in circles and circles till the broke out the arena. They kept fighting around the planets till the planets started to spin and made the planets spin. And they say that that Capleo and Senco fight till this day.

Monday, January 17, 2011

inner and outer planets/ the sun

asteroids, Meteors, comets, and moon